Wednesday, February 17, 2010

What do you think?

I'm writing my 6th essay about a short story from the book "I Robot". What do you think of my intro so far?

People say a lot of things. We say things we mean and things we don't mean. In some cases we can't tell whether or not what others say is what they really mean. Then people start to make assumptions off of false information which make things hectic for both people. That is the dilemma in the short story “Little Lost Robot” from the book I Robot when a robot follows what it is told because it cannot make decisions on its own.

4 comments:

  1. That is the dilemma in the short story “Little Lost Robot” from the book I Robot when a robot follows what it is told because it cannot make decisions on its own.

    Remember Harrison-You do not want to describe anything from the book in the narritive and thesis. Instead of saying a part from the book, say something that includes the author, like: That is the dilemma in the short story "Little Lost Robot, from the book that (author name) wrote, which is I Robot. You get the point, Harrison.

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  2. i concure with ach no talking about story in the intro.

    concure is a synonim to agree (i cant remember how to spell some words)

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